From our audience feedback, all our comments liked the heavy breathing and screaming as they felt it was effective and showed the genre of our film. People had different opinions on the fast transactions, we agreed with Jonty's comment as the quick pace builds tension. The comments recieved were constructive and positive and were from the audience we were targetting. We were unsure of the word 'wrong' and what the audience would think of the effect of it, however the audience seemed to like it. From this feedback I feel we could have made the transitions slightly slower to suit both nimran and jontys taste. This would still have added suspense but also made it not look as rushed targetting all of our audience.
It would be a good place here to say:
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b) what improvements you could have made to target your audience more specifically.
c)what's your opinion on the transition issue and why?
Mrs H
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